Thursday, 16 August 2012

Blog post 30



A very big thank you to everyone who followed my journey in using the blogging process to develop my artwork. I had my assessment this week and the lecturers are very excited about the project. They have told me to put my other projects on hold until next year and concentrate on developing Marushka's story further.
I need to develop an installation of a big graphic novel with stitching and embroidering that the public can walk into and interact with. I have three months to do this in!
So here is a big request/plea from me to all who read the story for some input/feedback/ideas/comments on how to do this successfully.  You could tell me which images worked for you as I have to redo quite a bit and tell the story visually, without any script.
I am taking a week off to "rest" and work on my written assignment and take my dogs for runs.

 Thank you so much
Marushka
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  1. marlene17 August 2012 at 00:27

    Hi Jenny

    I had a feeling that the story was being told too fast and that you could add more detail. The scene where Marushka became a flower and came out to dance at night could be elaborated on, in my opinion.

    Another scene that went a bit too fast for me was her death and being taken out through the window. To people who are not familiar with the story, it can be a bit confusing,

    Enjoy your rest and well done!

    Looking forward to more.......

    Marlene

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  2. Jenny17 August 2012 at 01:38

    Thanks Marlene, good point. I'll work on that.

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  3. KRSDBR17 August 2012 at 10:57

    Maak die blom baie mooi, soos 'n juweel... wanneer sy dans kan daar baie meer swaaie wees, meer gevoel... wanneer daar bloed is kan dit baie rooi wees, wanneer sy daar is kan sy baie mooi wees... wanneer sy loer kan haar oge baie groot wees , wanneer hy eet kan sy tande baie groot wees... om beter te kan byt etc etc... liefde... C

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  4. Jenny17 August 2012 at 23:51

    Baie, baie dankie Chris.

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